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Bring me back..
Back to reality.
Where you keep
piercing me with
your cruelty.
How can you laugh,
While I sit here and cry?
How can you
just put on your headphones,
When I'm asking "why"??
How can you go
from the best thing in my life-
to the cruelest being to ever exist...
(I can't believe i said yes-
when you asked me to be your wife...)
You heartless bastard-
You've reduced me to
a bleeding, crumbling
Soul-less, blind existence
Can't you see?!?!?!!?!?!
I hate what you've
done to me.
Back to reality.
Where you keep
piercing me with
your cruelty.
How can you laugh,
While I sit here and cry?
How can you
just put on your headphones,
When I'm asking "why"??
How can you go
from the best thing in my life-
to the cruelest being to ever exist...
(I can't believe i said yes-
when you asked me to be your wife...)
You heartless bastard-
You've reduced me to
a bleeding, crumbling
Soul-less, blind existence
Can't you see?!?!?!!?!?!
I hate what you've
done to me.
So i think this is the first poem ive written that actually had an "ANGRY" tone to it. well i think its kinda angry...well when i read this , i can sorda feel the emotion...so hopefully you can too....enjoy
© 2005 - 2024 roseonurcoffindoor
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Wow... really good...
I didn't like the part "(I can't believe i said yes-when you asked me to be your wife...)", it's kinda not fitting...
I didn't like the part "(I can't believe i said yes-when you asked me to be your wife...)", it's kinda not fitting...